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Old and young

So she was young, and he was old

His hair was grey, his manner cold

They walked along a quiet lane

True love you dare not constrain

But once upon a sunny day

They left that path... they went astray

They travelled where you haven't been

They loved it what you're not to ween

He called her Schatzi or like this,

Her freedom was his grief, her bliss

Since I'm so wise, I'll say again

True love you dare not constrain

What do you think, is this piece of poetry I wrote good or bad?

Overall, I think it's rather good. The line "they loved it what you're not to ween" is a bit iffy, but, all in all, pretty good. It's pacy, not so long that you get bored, and has some striking wording, which keeps the reader interested. The meaning of the poem is vaguely unclear, though I think I get the gist (something to do with a young girl falling in love with an older man?). Keep it up.

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Very good!

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its ok

What do you think, is this piece of poetry I wrote good or bad?

I like it.

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oh em gee! thats amazing! you should right a poetry book!! i lovee the words you use! your truly an amazing writer!

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i think its a very cool poem

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Its pretty good.

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sounds good to me....nice job.

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Your poem flows nicely and contains vivid wording, but the meaning is lost on me. The poem doesn't make sense. Sorry!

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Hmm...it's a nice little poem you have there, but poems does not usually involve "you" from "you're not to ween"

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Poetry is like art - and beauty - the person who wrote it is expressing their view point -

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nice.. i really like it!

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typical..read some poets ...then you can judge for yourself..i am sure no one really wants to hurt your feelings.

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it's quite ok

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i think the line "true love you dare not constrain" should either be 1 syllable longer or 1 syllable shorter. also, maybe it's just me but what does "they loved it what you're not to ween (sic)" mean?

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omg i like it!

you should be a poet!

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They left that path... they went astray is a little redundant. The last paragraph is a little confusing, the third line needs a couple of these ". Since it is the man speaking you need to use quotation marks.

Overall I think it is pretty nice.

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I think the rhyme scheme is a bit strained. Try writing it without the rhyme, to better illustrate the concepts you have put forth.