Lying here all alone from the corner i must roam,,,,Down that road to history back,,,,My years have youth i lack,,, Hair gone grey just like that smelling like a gutter rat,,,,Unheard and unseen living in a bad dream,,,,The cards are falling all around my turns coming for the ground
Can you read my poem tell me what you think ? AJ?
I think you have real potential as a poet. Don't stop expressing yourself.
Can you read my poem tell me what you think ? AJ?
It's good. Keep on writing.
Can you read my poem tell me what you think ? AJ?
Sound like they could be good lyrics, you thought about putting this to music?
Can you read my poem tell me what you think ? AJ?
Well, Edger.. i personally think your poems are pretty good. I'm impressed.
keep writing them. i want to hear them all.
Can you read my poem tell me what you think ? AJ?
Sorry, dawg. It was a little pitchy to me. You know, not your best night. Paula?
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