What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

I've heard the news, it's come to pass,

40 today, no longer a lass,

No hairs of grey, no saggy bits,

No wrinkles yet, your skin still fits,

So celebrate, and pour the wine,

I'd rather be your age than mine!!

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

kool lol if some did that 4 me i'd be happy

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

Hey Ella,

This is really good, well done!!!

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

thats good you should sell it to a card company

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

Thats good!!

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

What a wonderful little ditty. Try selling it to Purple Ronnie

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

I like it actually

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

Thats brilliant very witty.

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

It is good. I would maybe trying thinking more though how the person you wrote it for would think about it. If they are sensetive about their age then maybe change it up a bit. If not keep it the same because it is good.

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

I think that's great. Well done.

Seems like your mate is better at 40 than I was lol

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

its really good make sure no one steals it gd job

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

Excellent.. and very thoughtful of you! Your friend will love it.

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

keep writing but did not understand why you would rather be her age than you are now???.if you ask any forty yr old what age would they be imsure they woulsd say your age

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

Good job!

I am NO poet....and I know it!

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

like it :)

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

WOW!!!!! that was awesome send it to a card company trust me make more rymes - poems whatever you call it!

What do you think of this birthday rhyme I have written for my friends 40th birthday?

very good.. your a poet,and don't know it